03-28-2022, 09:45 AM
Good morning, gents, and thanks for sharing your thoughts about the orchid.
Last night at midnight when I posted it, I thought the details and lighting made it look dramatic. This morning, I think it looks harsh and over-processed. I am on a different computer though and maybe that is a factor too. I think I may post an additional version with softer tones and reduced highlights now that I am looking at it with fresher eyes.
Peter, I would leave all those jet trails except for one major one that is almost touching the top of the land structure. It is the chubbiest light trail and on a diagonal slant. I find that one a tad distracting. Other than that, you created a Dynomite composition with great colors and mood. Good to see you.
Grant, Does your friend enter her orchids in shows and competitions? When I read 42 years, I thought wow, that is a long time. But we are right behind you. We will be married 40 years this November. Hard to believe!
Going to go review my orchid now and might return with a less "in your face version".
Lorell
Last night at midnight when I posted it, I thought the details and lighting made it look dramatic. This morning, I think it looks harsh and over-processed. I am on a different computer though and maybe that is a factor too. I think I may post an additional version with softer tones and reduced highlights now that I am looking at it with fresher eyes.
Peter, I would leave all those jet trails except for one major one that is almost touching the top of the land structure. It is the chubbiest light trail and on a diagonal slant. I find that one a tad distracting. Other than that, you created a Dynomite composition with great colors and mood. Good to see you.
Grant, Does your friend enter her orchids in shows and competitions? When I read 42 years, I thought wow, that is a long time. But we are right behind you. We will be married 40 years this November. Hard to believe!
Going to go review my orchid now and might return with a less "in your face version".
Lorell
